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and I'm thinking of the time,
the time when she said,
when she said...
I forget.
and so, this time.
third time unlucky,
or so it seems.
that which I'm aiming for;
Or,
at least,
that's what I think.
and it will always continue,
we're tossed aside,
back of the queue.
A to B.
top of the fucking class.
and I'm thinking
of the time
when she said what she said
but I just don't know.
I forget what it is,
but I know how it feels.
and I know how it feels.
It feels great.
the time when she said,
when she said...
I forget.
and so, this time.
third time unlucky,
or so it seems.
that which I'm aiming for;
Or,
at least,
that's what I think.
and it will always continue,
we're tossed aside,
back of the queue.
A to B.
top of the fucking class.
and I'm thinking
of the time
when she said what she said
but I just don't know.
I forget what it is,
but I know how it feels.
and I know how it feels.
It feels great.
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sup guys,
so like, *deviantkupo told me to write more poetry. So I did.
This poem is about several things, all vaguely related all joined together in some tangled poetic meat pile.
It's experimental becuase I tried to express happiness in a sad way.
It's like teenage angst in reverse.
Anyways, toodles.
so like, *deviantkupo told me to write more poetry. So I did.
This poem is about several things, all vaguely related all joined together in some tangled poetic meat pile.
It's experimental becuase I tried to express happiness in a sad way.
It's like teenage angst in reverse.
Anyways, toodles.
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you've a talent. this is better than you realize.
please keep the screenshot of the poem. the obsolete OS, DOS-like font as part of the poem - it feels organic and invites nostalgia. it's like technology's "angst in reverse"
consider keeping the old text commands - .
your writing in this instance reminds me of Charles Bukowski's poetry.
never lose your insanity x
please keep the screenshot of the poem. the obsolete OS, DOS-like font as part of the poem - it feels organic and invites nostalgia. it's like technology's "angst in reverse"
consider keeping the old text commands - . your writing in this instance reminds me of Charles Bukowski's poetry.
never lose your insanity x